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Revenue sources and expenditures of a USA Charity in one year,2016 (pie chart)

The given two pie charts below illustrate the amount of revenue resources and expenditure of a USA Charity in 2016. Overall, the amount of donated food accounted for the highest income, whereas program services was the largest expenditure during the period given. On the other hand, government grants and investment income did not give much significant contribution on revenue sources. Looking at the revenue sources charts, it can be clearly seen that donated food is the largest income which accounted for precisely 86%. In contrast, the least income was contributed by government grants and investment income which was responsible for 0. 2% each. Moreover, for the other remaining percentage was contributed by community contributions and program revenue which made up, precisely 10. 4% and 2. 2%, respectively. On the second pie chart, it is evident that program services contribute the highest percentage which formed nearly 96% of the whole expenditure, whereas 2. 6% is accounted for fund raising as the second lowest expenditure and the remaining percentage is contributed by management and general about 1. 6%. The total amount of income was $53. 561. 580 which was just enough to cover the expenditures of $53. 224. 896.
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given
two pie charts below illustrate the amount of
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revenue
resources and
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expenditure
of a USA Charity in 2016.

Overall
, the amount of donated food accounted for the highest
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income
, whereas program services was the largest
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expenditure
during the period
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given
.
On the other hand
,
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government
grants and investment
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income
did not give much significant
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contribution on
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revenue
sources.

Looking at the
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revenue
sources charts, it can be
clearly
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seen
that donated food is the largest
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income
which accounted for
precisely
86%.
In contrast
, the least
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income
was contributed
by
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government
grants and investment
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income
which was responsible for 0. 2% each.
Moreover
, for the other remaining percentage
was contributed
by community contributions and program
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revenue
which made up,
precisely
10. 4% and 2. 2%,
respectively
.

On the second pie chart, it is evident that program services contribute the highest percentage which formed
nearly
96% of the whole
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expenditure
, whereas 2. 6%
is accounted
for
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fund raising
as the second lowest
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expenditure
and the remaining percentage
is contributed
by management and general about 1. 6%. The total amount of
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income
was $53. 561. 580 which was
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just
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enough
to cover the
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expenditures
of $53. 224. 896.

IELTS academic Revenue sources and expenditures of a USA Charity in one year, 2016 (pie chart)

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