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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. n3Ke
The two different pictorial representation illustrates the growth of cutting tools in stone age of two different time dimension. Overall tool A which shows 1. 4 million years ago cutting with front view, side view and back view as it can be seen that front view of the rock cutting is not in very much shape where as side view is tend to be straight add on with back view of rock is not as finished, the height of the tool is around 10 cm. On the other hand tool B which is 0. 8 million years old rock cutting is little bit more finished or carved more efficiently as the front view is far polished than tool A's front side, furthermore the side view is more sculpt as it is half of tool A rock's side view, considering the hieght is same which is around 10 cm but the back side of the rock is notched precisely compared to the tool A rock's back side.
The two
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different
pictorial representation illustrates the growth of
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cutting
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tools
in
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stone age
of two
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different
time dimension.

Overall
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tool
A which
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shows
1. 4 million years ago
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cutting
with
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front
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view
, side
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view
and
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back
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view
as it can be
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seen
that
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front
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view
of the
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rock
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cutting
is not in
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very
much shape
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where as
side
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view
is
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tend
to be straight
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add
on with
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back
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view
of
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rock
is not as finished, the height of the
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tool
is around 10 cm.

On the other hand
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tool
B which is 0. 8 million years
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old
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rock
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cutting
is
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little bit
more finished or carved more
efficiently
as the
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front
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view
is far polished than
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tool
A's
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front
side,
furthermore
the side
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view
is more sculpt as it is half of
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tool
A rock's side
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view
, considering the
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hieght
is same which is around 10 cm
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but
the
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back
side of the
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rock
is notched
precisely
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tool
A rock's
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back
side.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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