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The graph shows typical levels in enthusiasm, confidence and ability of students attending a ten week Ielts course. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

The graph shows typical levels in enthusiasm, confidence and ability of students attending a ten week Ielts course. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below 7D96
The line graphs compares the routine measures in enthusiasm, confidence and ability of students be present at a ten week ielts course. Over all, enthusiasm have the highest proportion while attending the Ielts course than the confidence and ability by the end of the week. Firstly, enthusiasm have the highest proportion while it decrease rapidly in the following weeks and reached to half of that number ( about 50 proportion ) in the between of 6 week but it increase rapidly to reach a peak whereas remain stable by the end of a ten week. Similarly, ability and confidence have a little less gap between the both at the start but ability increase rapidly to level off upto 65 proportion and remain stable upto the end of the week. Confidence have slowly increase whereas it flactuated and rise slightly upto 55 proportion but rapidly decline in the ten week. At last, enthusiasm have the highest proportion in the Ielts course but less confidence and more ability in the week
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IELTS academic The graph shows typical levels in enthusiasm, confidence and ability of students attending a ten week Ielts course. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

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