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The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia.

The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia. RrDk
The bar charts illustrate the rate of watching 2 kinds of television shows such as reality shows and the game shows for gender and the various age groups in Australia. Overall, it can bee seen that, percentage of woman are higher than man. However, in age group superior percetage are people with age of 45 and over for both genres of tv shows. According to the bar chart, in reality shows, there are significiant Difference between the gender, whereas woman are more likely tend to watch it and it it is almost as a twice that other. On the contrary, male is prone to watch to game shows and percentage of men overtaking the woman only 1% where it is equal to 61%. On other hand, the increase of pattern in reality shows is directly proportional with age. The age from 16 to 24 rate just over half, but the highest point for this sort of tv shows is over 45s age group (just under 70%). However, there are slighly dissimiliar sample for age types in game shows. The ratio of shows watched by 25- to 44-year-olds is considerably lower than the ratio watched by 16- to 24-year-olds and those over 45.
The bar charts illustrate the rate of watching 2 kinds of television
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such as reality
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and the game
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for gender and the various
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age
groups in Australia.

Overall
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group superior
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are
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with
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of 45 and
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for both genres of
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tv
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.

According to the bar chart, in reality
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, there are
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significiant
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, male is prone to
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to game
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and percentage of
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men
overtaking the woman
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1% where it is equal to 61%.

On other hand, the increase of pattern in reality
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is
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. The
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from 16 to 24 rate
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the highest point for this sort of
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types in game
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. The ratio of
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watched
by 25- to 44-year-olds is
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by 16- to 24-year-olds and those
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IELTS academic The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia.

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