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the graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015.

the graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. dmJP

The line graph illustrates the information about the number of people who visit four different museums such as Louvre, Vatican, London Science and Shenzhen Museum each year from 1980 to 2015. Overall, Louvre had way more visitors than the other three places. By contrast, Vatican Museum had increased considerably over. In 1980, Louvre had the highest numbers of visitors, with 8 million, while Vatican Museum, London Science Museum and Shenzhen Museum had roughly 5, 4 and 3. 5 of million, respectively. Over the following 10-year period, there were two museums showing a falling trend, which is London Science and Shenzhen, approach to 3 million. In the meanwhile, Louver and Vatican’s visitors had risen to 9 million and 6 million, respectively. From 2000 to 2015, three out of four museums shown the growth rate except for London Science, which had been dropping continuously. Louvre and Vatican had reached to approximately 9 million while Shenzhen had 4 million visitors.

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