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The graph shows the top five countries of origin of people moving to New Zealand to live between 2001 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The given graph illustrates the five nations in terms of their citizens migrating to New Zealand over a three-year period from 2001 to 2004 It is clear that the number of people from Britain moving to New Zealand witnessed a significant increase throughout the given period, while that of Fiji decreased slightly. Besides, the figure for the remainder experienced diverse patterns. To be specific, commencing with nearly 6000 immigrants in 2001, the number of the British moving to New Zealand rose markedly to 8000 in 2004, surpassing other countries to be the one with the highest figure. Contrary to the former, the number of Fiji’s immigrants decreased slightly and it was also the lowest number over three years. On the other hand, India had the second most people migrating to New Zealand in 2001 and then exceeded Britain to rank first with over 8000 immigrants in the next year, however, this figure decreased steeply to approximately 5000 in 2004. Furthermore, China followed a similar trend, climbing rapidly from nearly 600 to over 8000 in the first year, after which this figure fell sharply to over 2000 in 2004.

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