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The bar chart depicts the proportion of phones sold over four years, globally. The units are sorted by brands such as Samsung, Apple, Nokia, LG and, ZTE. Overall, ZTE showed the lowest number of sells over the whole of period (from 2009 to 2013) compared to the highest purchase of Nokia throughoout the same period of time. Firstly, Nokia had a productive business reached a point at marginally under 450 in 2009 and just over 400 in 2011. Then, in 2013 decreased sharply until a number of 250. In stark constrast, Samsung skyrocketed from 2009 to 2013. In fact, it recorded well over 200 in 2009 prior to increasing until 450 during the last year (2013). As the remaining products are concerned, namely Apple, LG, and ZTE, the first one experienced an connsiderable increase (150 in 2013) from the beginning since in 2009, touched just over 0. As opposed to LG, that dropped gradually in these four years. However, ZTE reported a miniscule amount for each year.

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