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The chart below shows the results of a British survey taken in 2005 related to the housing preferences of people in the UK.

The chart below shows the results of a British survey taken in 2005 related to the housing preferences of people in the UK. A3A9L
The bar chart given illustrates data regarding the proportion of UK people in London, Oxford and Cambridge preferring four different types of houses in the year 2005. As can be inferred from the chart, while a decrease was witnessed in the percentage of British citizens who like Flats, that in Detached houses increased. Meanwhile, stability was seen in the proportion of Terraced houses' favorites people, which fluctuated in Semi-detached.
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illustrates data regarding the proportion of UK
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people
in London, Oxford and Cambridge preferring four
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different
types of
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houses
in the year 2005. As can
be inferred
from the chart, while a decrease
was witnessed
in the percentage of British citizens who like Flats, that in Detached
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houses
increased. Meanwhile, stability was
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seen
in the proportion of Terraced
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houses
' favorites
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people
, which fluctuated in Semi-detached.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a British survey taken in 2005 related to the housing preferences of people in the UK.

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