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The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information and reporting the main features, and make compassion where relevant

The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. GKDw

The line graph illustrates the changes in the population aged 65 and over in the USA, Japan, and Sweden between 1940 and 2040. Overall, the amount of older populations in selected countries significantly grew, but in the USA and Sweden, the growth was gradual, apart from Japan, where a peak was reached in 2020. The USA and Sweden had a similar tendency of growth, both countries reached a peak in 1960 and 1980, but between 2000 and 2020 the situation was substantially opposite. Sweden continued its rise, while the USA had a steady period of stability. Japan had a fall in its population between 1940 and 1960, the proportion of the older population accounted for 5%, but from 1980 started the significant rise and Japan increased the level of proportion from 5% up to 30% in 40 years.

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 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 aged 65 and over in the USA, Japan, and Sweden between 1940 and 2040.

Overall
, the amount of older You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
populations
 in selected countries significantly
 grew, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in the USA and Sweden, the growth was gradual, apart from Japan, where a peak was reached
 in 2020.

The USA and Sweden had a similar tendency of growth, both countries reached a peak in 1960 and 1980, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 between 2000 and 2020 the situation was substantially
 opposite. Sweden continued its rise, while the USA had a steady period of stability.

Japan had a fall in its You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 between 1940 and 1960, the proportion of the older You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 accounted for 5%, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 from 1980 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 the significant rise and Japan increased the level of proportion from 5% up to 30% in 40 years. 