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The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. B9Aa
The pie charts provide information about the young people, that are among eighteen to twenty-five, are which type of inventions used for connecting chanels in Canada from 2009 to 2019. Overall, the classification is consisting of six variety of devices, which are smartphone, notebook, tablet, computer and two type of TV. Moreover, the percentages are replaced with each other superficially between these years. However, the conventional type of television has reduced significantly to sign up programs in 2019, and also it was accounted for 34% to 4% in 2009 and 2019 respectively. The percentages, which was had by conventional TV, are covered from flat-screen TV, also mobile phone in the near year. On the other hand, the least preferring, that is on tablet column in 2009, is dedicated gradually to use more in 2019. In detail, the data is followed 1 in 20 people and less than one-quarter kronolijical respectively.
The pie charts provide information about the young
people
, that are among eighteen to twenty-five, are which type of inventions
used
for connecting
chanels
in Canada from 2009 to 2019.

Overall
, the classification
is consisting
of six variety of devices, which are smartphone, notebook, tablet, computer and two type of TV.
Moreover
, the percentages
are replaced
with each other
superficially
between these years.

However
, the conventional type of television has
reduced
significantly
to
sign
up programs in 2019, and
also
it
was accounted
for 34% to 4% in 2009 and 2019
respectively
. The percentages, which
was had
by conventional TV,
are covered
from flat-screen TV,
also
mobile phone in the near year.

On the other hand
, the least preferring,
that is
on tablet column in 2009,
is dedicated
gradually
to
use
more in 2019. In detail, the data
is followed
1 in 20
people
and less than one-quarter
kronolijical
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years.

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