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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Qp1b

The bar graphs provide information about both graduate and postgraduate students, who were finished their studies in 2008, did not prefer employing in a full-time job after lives in the United Kingdom. Overall, the information is comparised of four area, as well as numbers are higher in classification of graduate students than the postgraduate statistics. The percentages are similar with each other absent the category of part-time work, which is located in the postgraduates data. Regarding the graphs, the most demanded choise is called further study option for two of them. In that case, the information is illustrated that this category has 29, 665, also 2, 725 numbers for college and postgraduate students respectively. Secondly, the part-time option is preferred the second opportunity in 2008 by people, who were choosed by postgraduates students more than the other type of class, if we compare with each other. On the other hand, the classification of voluntary is the less preferred path both of them. The data is followed to those numbers 3, 500, that is in the first information, also 345, which is located in the another data.

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