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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. PNJJ
This graph chart indicates amounts of passengers at Underground Station in London between 6 and 22 o'clock. Overall, the graph is randamly up and down, and there are two highest points in the morning and the evening. At the eight o'clock, the number of people was the highest at 400, followed by the secound highest number at 18 o'clock, which figure was approximately 380. The lowest amount of underground users were marked at around 100 at 6 and 16 o'clocks, which were just two hours before the peak times. Also, the figure after 20 o'clock is relatively low numbers of people between 120 and 170. The wave to reach the third highest was in the afternoon from 10 to 14 o'clocks. The number of passanger rapidly went down to the lowest point at 16 o'clock. To sum up with these, most passangers used Underground Station at 8 and 18 o'clocks, and there is relatively medium usage in the afternoon, expect 16 o'clock.
This graph chart indicates amounts of passengers at Underground Station in London between 6 and 22
o'clock
.
Overall
, the graph is
randamly
up and down, and there are two highest points in the morning and the evening.

At the eight
o'clock
, the
number
of
people
was the highest at 400, followed by the
secound
highest
number
at 18
o'clock
, which figure was approximately 380.

The lowest amount of underground users
were marked
at around 100 at 6 and 16
o'clocks
, which were
just
two hours
before
the peak times.
Also
, the figure after 20
o'clock
is
relatively
low
numbers
of
people
between 120 and 170.

The wave to reach the third highest was in the afternoon from 10 to 14
o'clocks
. The
number
of
passanger
rapidly
went down to the lowest point at 16 o'clock.

To sum up with these, most
passangers
used
Underground Station at 8 and 18
o'clocks
, and there is
relatively
medium usage in the afternoon,
expect
16
o'clock
.
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IELTS academic The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

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