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The graph shows the population in China, India, Europe and USA from 1950 to 2050.

The graph shows the population in China, India, Europe and USA from 1950 to 2050. 2Njb
Given is a line graph, which displays energy consumption in Australia from 1980 to 2030; the energy is divided into different categories according to fuel sources. Overall, it can be seen that there is an upward trend for all types of energy except during the period from 1980 to 2010, and this trend is predicted to continue up to and including 2030. In 1980, 35 billion units of oil were used to generate energy. Fluctuations in the first 15 years notwithstanding, the units of consumption experienced a steady growth from 1995 onwards, and projections show the usage will hit about 48 billion by 2030. Even though coal starts the graph much lower at 16 billion units and natural gas at 20 billion units, they are both expected to climb to end at 32 billion and 25 billion units, respectively, with the usage of coal now ahead by approximately 7 billion units. Standing at 4 billion units in 1980, nuclear and solar energy underwent a marginal increase in their consumption units, and are expected to reach 8 billion and 6 billion units, respectively, in 2030, according to estimates.
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Given
is a line graph, which displays
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energy
consumption in Australia from 1980 to 2030; the
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energy
is divided
into
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different
categories according to fuel sources.
Overall
, it can be
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seen
that there is an upward trend for all types of
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energy
except during the period from 1980 to 2010, and this trend
is predicted
to continue up to and including 2030.

In 1980, 35
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billion
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units
of oil were
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used
to generate
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energy
. Fluctuations in the
first
15 years notwithstanding, the
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units
of consumption experienced a steady growth from 1995 onwards, and projections
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show
the usage will hit about 48
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billion
by 2030.
Even though
coal
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starts
the graph much lower at 16
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billion
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units
and natural gas at 20
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billion
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units
, they are both
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expected
to climb to
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end
at 32
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billion
and 25
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billion
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units
,
respectively
, with the usage of coal
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now
ahead by approximately 7
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billion
units.

Standing at 4
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billion
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units
in 1980, nuclear and solar
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energy
underwent a marginal increase in their consumption
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units
, and are
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expected
to reach 8
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billion
and 6
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billion
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units
,
respectively
, in 2030, according to estimates.
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IELTS academic The graph shows the population in China, India, Europe and USA from 1950 to 2050.

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6.5
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