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Sample Ielts Academic Writing Task 1 - The pie charts below show exports from various EU countries to India and China in 2000 and 2011

Sample Ielts Academic Writing Task 1 - The pie charts below show exports from various EU countries to India and China in 2000 and 2011 Qa1w

This pie chart displays the exports of material by India and China from different countries between the years 2000 to 2011. On an overall, Germany was the major exporter of goods to both the nations, while other had lesser and unchanged percentage of goods. In India, in 2000, United Kingdom was the biggest exporter by 29% and Belgium was the second largest exporter which was 3% lesser export by UK after that Germany by15%. While in China, Germany was the major exporter of goods by 38% and followed by France with 13%. Other countries had less than 10% of export to both countries. From 2000 to 2011, in India there was a drastic changed in export from UK almost decreased by around half of % and Belgium was fell by 5%. Germany surpassed both the UK and Belgium to 25%. While in China, Germany increased their export to 48% which is around half of the overall export. Other countries had approximately unchanged export to both the countries.

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 between the years 2000 to 2011.

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 by 29% and Belgium was the second largest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopkeepertraffickervendortraderbrokerseller
exporter
 which was 3% lesser You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
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 by UK after that Germany by15%. While in China, Germany was the major You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopkeepertraffickervendortraderbrokerseller
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 by 38% and followed by France with 13%. Other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
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 had less than 10% of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
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 to both countries.

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 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
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 from UK almost decreased by around half of % and Belgium was fell by 5%. Germany surpassed both the UK and Belgium to 25%. While in China, Germany increased their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
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 to 48% which is around half of the overall
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. Other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
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