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The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The graph illustrated the percentage of teenagers in the UK who followed a vegetarian diet for 6 decades from 1960 until 2020. Overall, before 1980 the number of vegetarian teenagers were constantly increasing. Then, it began to be inconsistent in between 1990 to 2000 and finally became constant during the last decade. The highest percentage was around 15 % in the 80's while the lowest was around 5 % in the 90's. In 1990 there were no more than 7 % teenagers who followed this diet. Later, in the beginning of the 2000's the number increased from 5 % to around 10 %. Finally, it slowly increases again in 2020.
The graph illustrated the percentage of
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teenagers
in the UK who followed a vegetarian diet for 6 decades from 1960 until 2020.

Overall
,
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before
1980 the number of vegetarian
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
teenagers
were
constantly
increasing. Then, it began to be inconsistent in
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between 1990 to 2000
and
finally
became constant during the last decade.

The highest percentage was around 15 % in the
Apostrophes aren’t needed for decades: “80s”.
80's
while the lowest was around 5 % in the
Apostrophes aren’t needed for decades: “90s”.
90's
. In 1990 there were no more than 7 %
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
teenagers
who followed this diet. Later, in the beginning of the
Apostrophes aren’t needed for decades: “2000s”.
2000's
the number increased from 5 % to around 10 %.
Finally
, it
slowly
increases again in 2020.

IELTS academic The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet.

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