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The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrated the difference in 2009 between the number of male and female research students studying six subjects (Physics, Astronomy, Geology, Biology, Medicine, and Veterinary medicine) at a British university. Overall, the number of male students were higher than female students in most subjects while Biology was the most popular subject among students. For the most favorite subject, Biology, there were 230 male and 200 female students. . In contrast, the university had around 40 male students less in veterinary medicine where there were 80 men and 120 women. The number of female students in Physics were the lowest among all with around 40 students which was a fifth of the total for the opposite gender. In Geology and Astronomy classes, both had almost the same number of students for both genders where women were half or less than men. However, both genders almost had the same number in Medicine (200 male and 175 female students).
The chart illustrated the difference in 2009 between the
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, Biology, there were 230 male and 200
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less in veterinary
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where there were 80
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in Physics were the lowest among all with around 40
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009.

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