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The diagram visualized the process of which cement is produced, along with tools are used, which is to make an essential product for construction, a concrete. In general, there are two integral steps: creating cement and mixing concrete. To begin with the cement, limestone and clay are blended together with powder by a machine called mixer before transmitting to rotating heater. At the stage, the mixed ingredients are rotated while increasing temperature. Following this, a grinder is used to grind those outputs resulting in a perfect cement. The final stage is to packing the cements in bags. Moving to the concrete manufacturing, there is only a step here, which adds all four needed ingredients, cement, water, sand and gravel in a concrete mixture in inconsistent proportion. The small stones should be mixed by 50% and the second largest proportion is sand as half as that of gravel. While the least component is a pure liquid, poured just a tenth, cement is used at merely 15%. Finally, the excellent concrete is done.

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cement
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, which is to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
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cement
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begin
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cement
, limestone and clay are blended
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before
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used
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cement
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cement
, water, sand and gravel in a concrete mixture in inconsistent proportion. The This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
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cement
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. 