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The graph shows the percentage of cars each family owns in Britain over a 40-year period, from 1990.

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The graph shows the percentage of cars each family owns in Britain over a 40-year period, from 1990. Overall, the data on people owing more than one car increases from their initial values by the end of the period shown on the other hand, the proportion of no-car households declines dramatically. In particular, most of the British own only one car. Looking in detail, in 1990, over 50% of households had no car which made it became the largest group, compared to about 35% for people who owned one car and 13% for those owning two or more cars. By 2021, the figure for the one-car owning family has shown a fluctuation and notably reached a peak of approximately 55% in 2005 while at the same, the percentage of people who have two or more cars hit the low of about 9% before starting to recover and increase. By 2030, the figure for people who own more than one car is predicted to grow over 40%. It is expected that a variation of people using one car will continue then it will reach the same percentage as the data on people having more than two cars. Interestingly around 2022, the figure for the one-car owner will surpass the proportion of no-car households. Meanwhile, a decline in the amount of no car is predicted at just 15% at the end of the shown period.
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the percentage of
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cars
each family
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owns
in Britain over a 40-year period, from 1990.

Overall
, the data on
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people
owing more than one
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car
increases from their initial values by the
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end
of the period shown
on the other hand
, the proportion of no-car households declines
dramatically
.
In particular
, most of the British
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own
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only
one car.

Looking in detail, in 1990, over 50% of households had no
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car
which made it became the largest group, compared to about 35% for
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people
who
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owned
one
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car
and 13% for those owning two or more
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cars
. By 2021, the figure for the one-car owning family has shown a fluctuation and
notably
reached a peak of approximately 55% in 2005 while at the same, the percentage of
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people
who have two or more
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cars
hit the low of about 9%
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before
starting to recover and increase.

By 2030, the figure for
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people
who
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own
more than one
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car
is predicted
to grow over 40%. It is
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expected
that a variation of
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people
using one
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car
will continue then it will reach the same percentage as the data on
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people
having more than two
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cars
.
Interestingly
around 2022, the figure for the one-car owner will surpass the proportion of no-car households. Meanwhile, a decline in the amount of no
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car
is predicted
at
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just
15% at the
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end
of the shown period.
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IELTS academic The graph shows the percentage of cars each family owns in Britain over a 40-year period, from 1990.

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