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Access to Internet that rural and urban/suburban households had between 1999 and 2004

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The column chart gives information about the percentage of access to the Internet some urban/suburban and provincial european households had over a 5-year period between 1999 and 2004. Overall, it is clear that the families in the cities had a higher access to the Internet, while the rural households had a considerably narrower access. However, both of the figures rose steadily throughout these 5 years. As is shown by the graph, the proportion of households that had the opportunity to use the Internet began at approximately 2%. Afterwards, the figure witnessed an increase from 2% to 10%. Subsequently, the percentage went up until it reached its peak in 2004. Regarding the Internet access of urban and suburban households, in 1999 it was around 15%. Over the next 3 years the proportion of these families increased to exactly 50%. By 2004 this figure grew steadily until it finished at nearly three-fifths of the overall percentage.
The column chart gives information about the percentage of
access
to the Internet
some
urban/suburban and provincial
european
households
had over a 5-year period between 1999 and 2004.

Overall
, it is
clear
that the families in the cities had a higher
access
to the Internet, while the rural
households
had a
considerably
narrower
access
.
However
, both of the figures rose
steadily
throughout these 5 years.

As
is shown
by the graph, the proportion of
households
that had the opportunity to
use
the Internet began at approximately 2%. Afterwards, the figure witnessed an increase from 2% to 10%.
Subsequently
, the percentage went up until it reached its peak in 2004. Regarding the Internet
access
of urban and suburban
households
, in 1999 it was around 15%. Over the
next
3 years the proportion of these families increased to exactly 50%. By 2004 this figure grew
steadily
until it finished at
nearly
three-fifths of the
overall
percentage.
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IELTS academic Access to Internet that rural and urban/suburban households had between 1999 and 2004

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
154 words
6.5
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