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square charts of precipitation of grasslands

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This square chart depicts how the precipitation of grasslands have been changed during 20 years from 1980 to 2000 through the hot climate of a desert. According to what shown in both charts. It's clear that recently, the annual pattern became different from before. To illustrate, in 1980 the fluctuation is more frequent among the seasons but precipitation growing effectively. While in 2000 the length of grassland became very poor. To analyze deeply in regard to the fist graph; Its obvious that highest length occurred was in Spring of March, which is nearly 320 mm. Then the scheme sloped down to 150 mm in July. On the other hand, in the beginning of 21st century, it's observed that the change of weather has been effected the rate of precipitation negatively! Since in April and March the average was on the least point, but after that the growing of grasslands has been dramatically increased for the following next four months. To sum up, the hot desert climate grassland has been converted in the period between 1980 and 2000.

This square chart depicts how the precipitation of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpastureprairieplainsteppesavanna
grasslands
 have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 during 20 years from 1980 to 2000 through the hot climate of a desert.

According to what shown in both charts. It's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that recently, the annual pattern became This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. To illustrate, in 1980 the fluctuation is more frequent among the seasons This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 precipitation growing effectively
. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
 in 2000 the length of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpastureprairieplainsteppesavanna
grassland
 became This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 poor.

To analyze deeply
 in regard to the fist graph; Its obvious that highest length occurred was in Spring of March, which is nearly
 320 mm. Then the scheme sloped down to 150 mm in July.

On the other hand
, in the beginning of 21st century, it's observed that the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 of weather has been effected
 the rate of precipitation negatively
!

Since in April and March the average was on the least point, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 after that the growing of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpastureprairieplainsteppesavanna
grasslands
 has been dramatically
 increased for the following next
 four months.

To sum up, the hot desert climate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpastureprairieplainsteppesavanna
grassland
 has been converted
 in the period between 1980 and 2000. 