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What does family gathering in Moonlight festival mean to you?

What does family gathering in Moonlight festival mean to you? Ydk9d
Gathering in the Moonlight festival is extremely meaningful to many people include children, adults and parents. Moonlight event occur in the middle day of July when there is a full and light moon. This is both a special festival and a chance for people to meet others. To be honest, it is such a fancy time that my family can rally owing to the bread and butter, our life is intensively buzzing. Furthermore, on this occasion offspring can come to see their parents after the past time. I had a wonderful memory when I was 10 years of age, my whole family sat around a table full of mooncakes, grapefruit and snacks. We ate, told many fun stories and sang together.
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include children, adults and parents. Moonlight
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occur in the middle day of July when there is a full and light moon. This is both a special festival and a chance for
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people
to
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meet
others. To be honest, it is such a fancy time that my family can rally owing to the bread and butter, our life is
intensively
buzzing.
Furthermore
, on this occasion offspring can
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come
to
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their parents after the
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past time
. I had a wonderful memory when I was 10 years of age, my whole family sat around a table full of
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mooncakes
, grapefruit and snacks. We ate,
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fun stories and sang together.
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IELTS academic What does family gathering in Moonlight festival mean to you?

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