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The line graph shows the visits to and from the UK between 1979 to 1999. The bar chart displays the countries these UK residents went to in 1999. The units are in millions. Overall, the UK residents had visited abroad more than overseas residents visiting the UK. In 1979, a little over 10 million residents visited abroad from the UK, while only 10 million overseas residents managed to visit the UK. By 1984, that crossed over 15 million UK residents venturing abroad, while a little more than 10 million foreigners came to visit the country. By 1989, the number of UK residents going abroad surpassed 30 million, as compared to 20 million overseas residents coming to visit the UK. Since then, the gap had started becoming wider. In 1994, more than 40 million visits had been recorded by the UK residents, while the rise for foreigners visiting the country was at a comparatively lower level – 25 million. By 1999, the difference is way too large, with more than 50 million UK residents visiting other countries as compared to less than 30 million overseas residents coming to the UK. In terms of popular destinations in 1999, UK residents chose France to be the first, with over 10 million people visiting annually. Spain is a close second (nearly 10 million), followed by the USA (less than 5 million), Greece and Turkey respectively.
The line graph
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visits
to and from the UK
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between 1979 to 1999
. The bar chart displays the
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countries
these UK
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residents
went to in 1999.
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The
units are in millions.

Overall
, the UK
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residents
had visited
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abroad
more than
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overseas
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residents
visiting the UK. In 1979, a
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little
over 10
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million
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residents
visited
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abroad
from the UK, while
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only
10
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million
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overseas
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residents
managed to
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visit
the UK. By 1984, that crossed over 15
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million
UK
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residents
venturing
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abroad
, while a
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little
more than 10
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million
foreigners came to
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visit
the
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country
. By 1989, the number of UK
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residents
going
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abroad
surpassed 30
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million
, as compared to 20
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million
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overseas
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residents
coming to
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visit
the UK. Since then, the gap had
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started
becoming wider. In 1994, more than 40
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million
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visits
had
been recorded
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residents
, while the rise for foreigners visiting the
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country
was at a
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–
25
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million
. By 1999, the difference is way too large, with more than 50
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million
UK
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residents
visiting other
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countries
as compared to less than 30
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million
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overseas
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residents
coming to the UK.

In terms of popular destinations in 1999, UK
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residents
chose France to be the
first
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million
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people
visiting
annually
. Spain is a close second (
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10
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, followed by the USA (less than 5
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, Greece and Turkey
respectively
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IELTS academic Residents visiting countries

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231 words
6.0
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