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The graph shows the number of people who have got vaccine against Covid-19 until Oct 2021 . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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As the graph clearly illustrates, Singapore and Cambodia are countries with the largest share of people fully vaccinated against COVID-19, with almost 80% of the population vaccinated. In second and third place are China and Malaysia with over 75% of their people vaccinated. Following that, Thailand, the world, Vietnam and Laos have achieved in having more than 40% of their population to get vaccines. Indonesia and the Phillippines stand in the last places with less than 39% of their people vaccinated. The largest share of fully vaccinated people is in Singapore with a whopping 79% of its population, and the country with the smallest share is Vietnam with a humble 17%. In conclusion, most countries have over half of their vaccinated population fully vaccinated, with the exception of Vietnam, the largest number being 79% and the smallest number being 19%. Furthermore, the world seemed to barely have half of the population vaccinated which is really dangerous, to say the least.

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