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The diagram shows the process of making liquid chocolate

The diagram shows the process of making liquid chocolate 8d5qx

The diagram illustates information about the stages of producing liquid chocolate for the food industry. It is clear that there are tenth steps for liquid chocolate manufacturing, beginning with the growing of the pods on the cacao trees and culminating in the production of the chocolate. First of all, the cocoa comes from the cacao tree, which is grown in the South American, African continents and Indonesia. Once the pods are ripe and red, they are harvested and the white cocoa beans are removed from it. Following a period of fermentation, they are laid out on a large tray so they can dry under the sun. In the next subsequent step, they are placed into large sacks prior to being delivered to the factory. The cocoa beans then roasted at a temperature of 350 degree before they are crushed and seperated from their outer shell. Finally, the inner part that is left is pressed and the liquid chocolate is produced.

The diagram Possible spelling mistake found.illustrates
illustates
 information about the stages of producing liquid chocolate for the food industry.

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that there are tenth steps for liquid chocolate manufacturing, beginning with the growing of the pods on the cacao trees and culminating in the production of the chocolate.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the cocoa This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 from the cacao tree, which is grown
 in the South American, African continents and Indonesia. Once the pods are ripe and red, they are harvested
 and the white cocoa beans are removed
 from it. Following a period of fermentation, they are laid
 out on a large tray This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they can dry under the sun.

In the next
 subsequent step, they are placed
 into large sacks prior to being delivered
 to the factory. The cocoa beans then roasted at a temperature of 350 degree This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 they are crushed
 and Possible spelling mistake found.separated
seperated
 from their outer shell. Finally
, the inner part that is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
is pressed
 and the liquid chocolate is produced
. 