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The table gives information about various enumerations of six nations: United States, China, Japan, Germany, India and the United Kingdom in 2017 in terms of GDP (gross domestic product), population, QoL (quality of life) index.

The table gives information about various enumerations of six nations: United States, China, Japan, Germany, India and the United Kingdom in 2017 in terms of GDP (gross domestic product), population, QoL (quality of life) index. Awj0n
The table gives information about various enumerations of six nations: United States, China, Japan, Germany, India and the United Kingdom in 2017 in terms of GDP (gross domestic product), population, QoL (quality of life) index. It is clear that, The United States had the highest statistics in GDP and population while the highest data of QoL is Germany. As can be seen from the table, The United States had a total GDP of 19. 5 trillion USD, followed by India with the figure being significantly lower, at 2. 7 trillion USD. The GDP in the United Kingdom was the lowest, at only 2. 6 trillion, nearly a half of Japan. In terms of population, The United States holds the top position at 325. 1 million whereas India reached the lowest of residents with just about 1, 388 million people. Regarding QoL, Germany had the highest figure and China had the lowest were 189. 74 and 90. 95 respectively.
The table gives information about various enumerations of six nations:
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, China, Japan, Germany, India and the
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Kingdom in 2017 in terms of GDP (gross domestic product), population,
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(quality of life) index.

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had the highest statistics in GDP and population while the highest data of
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is Germany.

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had a total GDP of 19. 5 trillion USD, followed by India with the figure being
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lower, at 2. 7 trillion USD. The GDP in the
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Kingdom was the lowest, at
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2. 6 trillion,
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a half of Japan. In terms of population, The
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holds the top position at 325. 1 million whereas India reached the lowest of residents with
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about 1, 388 million
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. Regarding
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, Germany had the highest figure and China had the lowest were 189. 74 and 90. 95
respectively
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IELTS academic The table gives information about various enumerations of six nations: United States, China, Japan, Germany, India and the United Kingdom in 2017 in terms of GDP (gross domestic product), population, QoL (quality of life) index.

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