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The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.

The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants. alX1V
The line graph illustrate the information about inside of fast food and sit down restaurent how many number of dish eaten by people per year in between 1970 and 2010. The data has been calibrated in number of meals. Overall, As can be clearly seen from the graph both fast food and sit down restaurent meals has a immense flactuation throught the time period. However, fast food meals are more sold by than sit down restaurent meals. To begain with, In 1970 the fast food meal stood at about 20 per year then, the number of meals experienced a gradual increase nearly about 30 per year in 1980 followed by a rapid incline menifested in the number of meals which accounted to less than 60 per year in 1990. then, it shaprly rise until around 119 per year in 2010. Moving further, sit down restaurent meal in 1970 start at just above 20 per year, before there was a significant rose about 38 per year seen in the number of meal in 1980 follwed by there was constant grew experinced in number of meal nearly about 45 per year, then there is a dramatic incline observed in meals number just over 60 per year in 2010.
The line graph illustrate the information about
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in between 1970 and 2010. The data has
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stood at about 20 per
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experienced a gradual increase
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in 1980 followed by a rapid incline
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in 1990.
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