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The diagram below shows the cycle of paper production from plantation stage

The diagram below shows the cycle of paper production from plantation stage kWD32
The method of making plane is start with pine tree and with making paper again with machine. Begain with pine tree cut and remove the hard layer of tree, then in second stage De barking in drum. after that make small pieces by using chipper and Futher cutting done by thermo mechanical refiner. Moreover, last stage of first cycle is roll all the wood semi powers in paper making machine and make paper side by side remove extra moisture of wood in form of water. finally news print on it after reading it all the papers are collected in kerbside next De lnking clean it add in recycling pulp mix all the final materials add in paper making machine it re produced paper.
The method of making
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with pine tree and with making paper again with machine.
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with pine tree
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cut
and remove the
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layer of tree, then in second stage
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barking in drum.
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after
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make
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small
pieces by using chipper and
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cutting done by
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thermo
mechanical refiner.
Moreover
, last stage of
first
cycle is roll all the wood semi powers in paper making machine and
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make
paper side by side remove extra moisture of wood in form of water.
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finally
news print on it after reading it all the papers
are collected
in kerbside
next
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De
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lnking
clean it
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add
in recycling pulp mix all the final materials
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add
in paper making machine it re produced paper.
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