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tructure your answers in logical paragraphs ?One main idea per paragraph

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The bar chart illustrates a nation’s exports, by category, in 2015 and 2016; and the table gives the changes and exports for each category, on a percentage basis during the same period. Overall, all categories increased except for precious stones and jewellery. The top two exports, which were oil-based goods and engineered products, had similar sales volumes. Petroleum products increased slightly by 3% from $60 billion in 2015 to about $62 billion in 2016. Engineered goods increased at a faster rate of 8. 5% from roughly $58 billion in 2015 to approximately $61 billion in 2016. The other three categories had much lower export values. Gems and jewellery recorded the only decline in sales of about $42 billion in 2015 declining by about 5 per cent in 2016. Farming products were $30 billion in 2015 and had only a slight increase of. 81%. The greatest increase, of over 15%, was for textiles, which increased from approximately $25 billion to over $30 billion.
The bar chart illustrates a nation’s
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, by
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, in 2015 and 2016; and the table gives the
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and
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for each
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, on a percentage basis during the same period.
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precious stones and
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The top two
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, which were oil-based
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and engineered products, had similar sales volumes. Petroleum products
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in 2015 to about $62
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in 2016. Engineered
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goods
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at a faster rate of 8. 5% from roughly $58
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in 2015 to approximately $61
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in 2016.

The other three
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categories
had much lower
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export
values. Gems and
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jewellery
recorded the
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decline in sales of about $42
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in 2015 declining by about 5 per cent in 2016. Farming products were $30
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billion
in 2015 and had
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a slight increase of. 81%. The greatest increase, of over 15%, was for textiles, which
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from approximately $25
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to over $30
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IELTS academic tructure your answers in logical paragraphs? One main idea per paragraph

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  American English
3 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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