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Overall, during both period Asia had the largest population in the world. Whereas north America was stable during both period. The worldwide population during 1900 was about 1, 600 million. Asia had the largest percentage of the population in the world with 60% of the total. While Europe had 25% population (including Russia). The two western continents North America and Africa contributed 5% and 4. 5% respectively. Latin America had 3% population in the world whereas other places were about 2. 5% during 1900.
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was stable during both period.

The worldwide
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during 1900 was about 1, 600 million. Asia had the largest percentage of the
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in the world with 60% of the total.
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Europe had 25%
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(including Russia). The two western continents North America and Africa contributed 5% and 4. 5%
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. Latin America had 3%
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in the world whereas other places were about 2. 5% during 1900.
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IELTS academic world population by region between

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2 paragraphs
84 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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