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e bar chart and the table show the actual figures and the per cent change, in a country’s export earnings, respectively. The data are for five major sectors, in billion dollars, during 2015 and 2016.

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The bar chart and the table show the actual figures and the per cent change, in a country’s export earnings, respectively. The data are for five major sectors, in billion dollars, during 2015 and 2016. Most of the sectors saw an increase in export earnings. However, the Gems and Jewellery category showed a slight decrease in its numbers. Additionally, the table indicates that Textiles had the largest transition in the period, and agricultural products registered an insignificant headway. The chart shows that export earnings from petroleum products stood above 60 billion dollars. The engineered products category which was around 55 billion dollars, in 2015, rose slightly higher than the 60 billion, in 2016. Interestingly, the textile sector which was around 25 billion dollars grew over 30 billion. Similarly, earnings from agricultural products hovered near 30 billion dollars. The table shows that fabric exports rose the highest, precisely by 15. 24%, and Engineered products saw an increase of 8. 4%. This was followed by oil derivatives, with a 3% growth rate. The smallest increase was found in the farming sector (0. 81%). Contrastingly, trade of precious stones and ornaments fell by 5. 18%.
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change
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export
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earnings
,
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. The data are for five major
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sectors
, in
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billion
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dollars
, during 2015 and 2016.

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sectors
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saw
an increase in
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export
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earnings
.
However
, the Gems and
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Jewellery
category
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showed
a slight decrease in its numbers.
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products
registered an insignificant headway.

The chart
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export
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earnings
from petroleum
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products
stood above 60
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billion
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dollars
. The engineered
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products
category which was around 55
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billion
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, in 2015, rose
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billion
, in 2016.
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, the textile
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which was around 25
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grew over 30
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.
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,
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from agricultural
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products
hovered near 30
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billion
dollars.

The table
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that fabric
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exports
rose the highest,
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products
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saw
an increase of 8. 4%. This
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was found
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sector
(0. 81%).
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, trade of precious stones and ornaments fell by 5. 18%.

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