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The graph shows the number of black bears and white bear in an area called Emma

The graph shows the number of black bears and white bear in an area called Emma 2K59k
From 1980 to 1990, an area called Emma saw a considerable upward trend of 1 in the number of white bears. This data was higher compared to that of black bears ( at 2). In the next next 20 years, the figure for white bears here remained unchanged at 3 while, and in circa 2005 the quantity of black bears started bears has started to overtake that of white bears. In 2020, the number of white bears rose slightly raised small to 3, 3. The estimation is that the number of white bears will increase slightly to be 3, 6 in 2040, this data increase is not significant. In Emma, while if the number of white bears climbed slightly rapidly between 1980 and 1990, the figure for black bears stabilized at 2 from 1980 to 2000. This data was lower compared to white bears. However, from 2000 to 2010, there was a significant increase of 1, 5 in the figure for black bears in this area. In Circa 2005, the figure for black bears compared to that of white bears was equal, but the number of black bears still went on to go up. In 2020, this data was higher in comparison with white bears and which carried on climbed slightly to 4. In the last phase, the number of black bears here is anticipated to rise quickly and will peak at more than 6 more 6, which is many times the number of of the number white bears.
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IELTS academic The graph shows the number of black bears and white bear in an area called Emma

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