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The graph shows the internet usage in Taiwan. Summarise the information , by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph shows the number of internet usage in Taiwan from year 1998-2000. In 16-30 age group of people percent every year decrease. In year 1998-2000, around 2 percent internet usage in less the 15, 53 percent in 16-30, 41 percent in 31-50, 4 percent in 59 or more years age groups. In year 1999, the number of internet usage in less than 15 years, 16-30 years, 21-50 years, 50 or more years old are 8, 45 and 39 percent respectively. In 2000, 9 percent are in less than 15, 44 percent in 16-30 years, 37 percent in 31-50 years, 10 percent are in 50 or more years age group. Every year internet usag increase in less than 15, decrease in 16-30 years, decrease in 31-50 years, increase in 50 or more years age group. Overall, every year number of internet usage decrease in young age group.
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1999, the number of internet
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