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The chart shows the number of basketball players in 4 American states between 1990 and 2000.

The chart shows the number of basketball players in 4 American states between 1990 and 2000. 2a3Y6
Presented for consideration is a line graph detailing finguers for the number of people who played basketball in 4 American states throughout the period from 1990 to 2000 Overall, it can be see that the amount of player in Florida and Wisconsin increased, while Texas and Arizona saw a decreased. It can also observed that Wisconsin always had more player than another state in the same time period. Looking at the number of Floridas who played, they started at 1 million and go up gradually and reached a peak about 4 millions by 2000. Similarly, the amount of players in Wisconsin top began at around 5 millions in 199, 0 after steadily rising to more than 6 millions in 2000. Turning to the remaining statistics, the number of player in Texas decreased sharply by one million untis from 1990 to 1996. After that this number dropped gradually to just over 1 millon at the end of the period. Be side, Arizona fluctued between 1990 and 1996, the highest number of player is over 4 millions in 1998, however they were an dramatically falled in 2 last years of period.
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who played basketball in 4 American states throughout the period from 1990 to 2000

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that the amount of
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in Florida and Wisconsin increased, while Texas and Arizona
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that Wisconsin always had more
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player
than another state in the same time period.

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Floridas
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million
and go up
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millions
by 2000.
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in Wisconsin top began at around 5
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millions
in 199, 0 after
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millions
in 2000.

Turning to the remaining statistics, the
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in Texas decreased
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untis
from 1990 to 1996.
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between 1990 and 1996, the highest
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is over 4
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in 1998,
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in 2 last years of period.
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