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The chart below shows the percentage of population in 4 country from 1950,2000,and 2050.

The chart below shows the percentage of population in 4 country from 1950, 2000, and 2050. aJ5o7
The bar chart gives information about the proportion of four different nations namely, India, USA, Japan and China by percentagewise in the year between 1950, 2000, and 2050. Overall, it is vividly manifested that the population were continues decline in all countries except from India. Japan was less proportion compare to other nation. To begin, in 1950, China was tops the list among the India, USA and Japan, it accounted for over the quater. There was a slight decrease observed in amount of people in 2000. However, a drastic decline seen in 2050 around 18%. Nevertheless, in Japan, the population was constant decreased in 3 years namely, 5%, 4%, 3%. Moving towards, in 2050, India will tops the list, it comprised to 21%, respectively. However, the portion of percentage was less by 5% in 1950. Moreover, the amount of proportion in USA was one ten in 1950 and in 2000 and 2050, followed by same around near 8%.
The bar chart gives information about the proportion of four
different
nations
namely
, India, USA,
Japan
and China by
percentagewise
in the year between 1950, 2000, and 2050.
Overall
, it is
vividly
manifested that the population were continues decline in all countries except from India.
Japan
was less proportion compare to other nation. To
begin
, in 1950, China was tops the list among the India, USA and
Japan
, it accounted for over the
quater
. There was a slight decrease observed in amount of
people
in 2000.
However
, a drastic decline
seen
in 2050 around 18%.
Nevertheless
, in
Japan
, the population was constant decreased in 3 years
namely
, 5%, 4%, 3%. Moving towards, in 2050, India will
tops
the list, it comprised to 21%,
respectively
.
However
, the portion of percentage was less by 5% in 1950.
Moreover
, the amount of proportion
in USA
was one ten in 1950 and in 2000 and 2050, followed by same around near 8%.

IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of population in 4 country from 1950, 2000, and 2050.

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