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The pie chart below illustrates the different types of smartphones used by attorneys in the U.S. in one year.

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The given pie chart demonstrates the various models of smartphones used by advocates in the U. S yearly. The pie chart shows five kind of smartphone categories, used by lawyers in the United States in a period of one year. Overall, the general trend shows that iphone if the biggest trend in a year. At the opposite side, Android, Blackberry, Windows and various other smartphones share lower usage percentages in a period of one year. In terms of the most significant feature of the chart, the largest category of smartphones was iphone devices, accounted for 62% of the total types of phones. Additionally, the next major segment of devices used by lawyers, was Android smartphones. which showed a slightly lower usage at 20%. When added together, these two categories made up four-fifths of smartphones usage by attorneys in a year. In stark contrast, the category with the lowst percentage of use was Blackberry, accounting for a minute 5% of all other smartphones. This trend was joined by windows-based phones. representing 10%, respectively. Of particular note is that the lowest categories made up only 15% of the total smartphone's usage by attorneys-at-law.
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percentages in a period of one year.

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by attorneys in a year.

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