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The line graph describes the growth of wages in Some country from the year 1993 to 2003.

The line graph describes the growth of wages in Some country from the year 1993 to 2003. 6LVRB
The line graph describes the growth of wages in Some country from the year 1993 to 2003. The growth started at two percent in 1993, but it didn’t stay there very long before it rapidly doubled in 1994. Further on, the percentages declines to three percent in 1995, stayed steady for a year, before starting to rise slowly and ending up just under four percent in 1997. 1998 was the best year where the wages growth peaked at six percent. However, after 1998 the wages grew less and less nearly every year. Only a year after, the percentage dropped to well under three percent, and stayed there on roughly three percent till 2000. In 2002 the wages reached the lowest point of just one percent growth. Luckily the growth rose in 2003 at just under two percent. Overall, the growth rate in wages in Some country has shown striking changes through the ten years.
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of wages in
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1993 to 2003.

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at two
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in 1993,
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in 1995, stayed steady for a
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,
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under four
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in 1997. 1998 was the best
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after, the percentage dropped to well under three
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, and stayed there on roughly three
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till 2000. In 2002 the wages reached the lowest point of
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. Luckily the
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rose in 2003 at
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under two percent.

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, the
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rate in wages in
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country has shown striking
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changes
through the ten years.
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IELTS academic The line graph describes the growth of wages in Some country from the year 1993 to 2003.

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