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the graph shows the information about wages of docters , nurses , teachers in 2010 to 2015.

the graph shows the information about wages of docters, nurses, teachers in 2010 to 2015. KlQo6

The line graph compares the salaries of doctors, nurses and teachers in percentages between 2010 to 2015. Overall, it can be clearly seen that, doctor had the highest salaries in every years. While, teachers had the lowest wages. To begin with, in 2010, doctor had around 10 % wages. It dramatically inclined till after following halved decades. Which accounted to be 50 %, which was almost times higher than year in 2010. On the flip side, Nurses salary was around 2 times higher than doctors in 2010. Surprisingly, it constantly plummeted by 20 % in 2015. On the other hand, the wages of teachers had 10 times lower than salaries of doctors during 5 years, which counted at 20%.

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