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The chart shows the results of a Labour Force Survey in the United Kingdom in 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary

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The table chart illustrates the proportion of a Labour Force Survey in both genders in the United Kingdom in 2007. Generally speaking, all employments have differences between the number of men and women who do it. We can easily see that men worked more than women in the United Kingdom in 2007. First of all, managers and senior officials, skilled trades and process, plant and machine operatives had male workers more than female workers. The percentage in different branches was not similar which in managers and senior officials was nearly 20% for men but only 10% for women, in skilled trades the males were much than the female over 15% and in process, plant and machine operatives was 12% for men and nearly 3% for women. That shows clear differences between the fields. Second, professional, associate professional and technical and elementary were the branches had the relatively similar ratio of men to women. The differences between each branches was not much just oscillated form 3% to 5%. Final, the last industries have more female workers than men is administrative and secretarial, personal service and sales and customer service. These departments a lỏt women loved them than men because it may be easier to do. The ratio between industries is 15%, 10% and 5% respectively. In conclusion, we can know more about the results of a Labour Force Survey in the United Kingdom in 2007. In different branches the number of men and women can not similar.
The table chart illustrates the proportion of a
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Labour
Force Survey in both genders in the United Kingdom in 2007.

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speaking, all employments have differences between the number of
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men
and
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women
who do it. We can
easily
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that
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men
worked more than
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women
in the United Kingdom in 2007.

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First of all
, managers and senior officials, skilled trades and process, plant and machine operatives had male workers more than female workers. The percentage in
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different
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branches
was not similar which in managers and senior officials was
nearly
20% for
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men
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but
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only
10% for
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women
, in skilled trades the males were much than the female over 15% and in process, plant and machine operatives was 12% for
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men
and
nearly
3% for
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women
. That
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shows
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clear
differences between the fields.

Second, professional, associate professional and technical and elementary were the
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branches
had the
relatively
similar ratio of
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men
to
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women
. The differences between each
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branches
was not much
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just
oscillated form 3% to 5%.

Final, the last industries have more female workers than
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men
is administrative and secretarial, personal service and sales and customer service. These departments a
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women
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them than
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men
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it may be easier to do. The ratio between industries is 15%, 10% and 5%
respectively
.

In conclusion
, we can know more about the results of a
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Labour
Force Survey in the United Kingdom in 2007. In
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different
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branches
the number of
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and
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women
can not similar.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the results of a Labour Force Survey in the United Kingdom in 2007

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