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the changes of Art gallery

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The maps describe the changes that took place in the Art Gallery from 2015 to present day. Overall, the Art Gallery underwent a number of changes, the most important of which were the construction of new rooms in the left hand while in the right part of the Art gallery remained over time. When comes inside, the reception desk was relocated to a position where it is closer to the entrance. The function of the rooms on the right hand of the entrance hall remained the same. Behind the receptionist area, a lift has been constructed in the right part of the stairs. The left side of the entrance hall witnessed drastic changes. Gallery shop has been built in the top left hand, replacing Cafe. There used to be a Gallery office in the front of Cafe, but it has been transformed into Vending machine. The Exhibition room 4 on the opposite side of the entrance hall was disappeared and Temporary exhibition, Children's area are constructed in this place. Last but not least, at the front of the entrance has the addition of ramp for wheel chair.
The maps
describe
the
changes
that took place in the Art
Gallery
from 2015 to present day.

Overall
, the Art
Gallery
underwent a number of
changes
, the most
important
of which were the construction of new rooms in the
left
hand while in the right part of the Art
gallery
remained over time.

When
comes
inside, the reception desk
was relocated
to a position where it is closer to the
entrance
. The function of the rooms on the right hand of the
entrance
hall remained the same. Behind the receptionist area, a lift has
been constructed
in the right part of the stairs.

The
left
side of the
entrance
hall witnessed drastic
changes
.
Gallery
shop has
been built
in the top
left
hand, replacing
Cafe
. There
used
to be a
Gallery
office in the front of
Cafe
,
but
it has
been transformed
into Vending machine. The Exhibition room 4 on the opposite side of the
entrance
hall
was disappeared
and Temporary exhibition, Children's area
are constructed
in this place. Last
but
not least, at the front of the
entrance
has the addition of ramp for wheel chair.
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