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the changes of Art gallery

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The maps describe the changes that took place in the Art Gallery from 2015 to present day. Overall, the Art Gallery underwent a number of changes, the most important of which were the construction of new rooms in the left hand while in the right part of the Art gallery remained over time. When comes inside, the reception desk was relocated to a position where it is closer to the entrance. The function of the rooms on the right hand of the entrance hall remained the same. Behind the receptionist area, a lift has been constructed in the right part of the stairs. The left side of the entrance hall witnessed drastic changes. Gallery shop has been built in the top left hand, replacing Cafe. There used to be a Gallery office in the front of Cafe, but it has been transformed into Vending machine. The Exhibition room 4 on the opposite side of the entrance hall was disappeared and Temporary exhibition, Children's area are constructed in this place. Last but not least, at the front of the entrance has the addition of ramp for wheel chair.
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Gallery
from 2015 to present day.

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, the Art
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underwent a number of
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changes
, the most
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important
of which were the construction of new rooms in the
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left
hand while in the right part of the Art
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gallery
remained over time.

When
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inside, the reception desk
was relocated
to a position where it is closer to the
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entrance
. The function of the rooms on the right hand of the
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hall remained the same. Behind the receptionist area, a lift has
been constructed
in the right part of the stairs.

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left
side of the
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entrance
hall witnessed drastic
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changes
.
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Gallery
shop has
been built
in the top
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left
hand, replacing
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Cafe
. There
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used
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Gallery
office in the front of
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Cafe
,
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but
it has
been transformed
into Vending machine. The Exhibition room 4 on the opposite side of the
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entrance
hall
was disappeared
and Temporary exhibition, Children's area
are constructed
in this place. Last
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has the addition of ramp for wheel chair.
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IELTS academic the changes of Art gallery

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4 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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