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The diagrams represent how a wind turbine process wind energy to be electricity energy. The location of the wind turbin affect to number of electricity energy have produced.

The diagrams represent how a wind turbine process wind energy to be electricity energy. The location of the wind turbin affect to number of electricity energy have produced. YwJLB
overall, a wind turbine can works maximumly when it recieve strong wind that can moves blades and the perfect place to put it is in the mountain. There are 3 main features of wind turbin. First one is steel tower, it’s so high and huge as well. This tool used for help the wind turbin to stand up and get enough wind to move blades. Second one is Blades that usually made by fibreglass or wood. This tool used for get the wind energy. When the wind is so strong, the blades can moving cyrcle and the energy of moving blades has transmit to generator which is is the third tool that used to produce electricity until 1. 5 megawatts. Fourth is wind sensor that shows speed and direction of the wind and it link to a computer in house to info people about the direction and angle. a wind turbine have to located in right place to get huge energy of electricity. As the figure shows that wind turbine in the mountain recieve maximum wind strengths than in the sea. Domestic turbine in the high land can reach 100 kilowatts of electricity energy whereas the wind turbine in the sea get weak wind because landscape not spoiled.
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wind
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turbine
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maximumly
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recieve
strong
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wind
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moves
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blades
and the perfect place to put it is in the mountain.

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turbin
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high and huge
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. This tool
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help
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turbin
to stand up and
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get
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enough
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wind
to
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move
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blades
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fibreglass
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energy
. When the
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wind
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strong, the
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blades
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energy
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blades
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to produce electricity until 1. 5 megawatts. Fourth is
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wind
sensor that
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shows
speed and direction of the
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house
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people
about the direction and angle.

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wind
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turbine
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get
huge
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energy
of electricity.
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in the mountain
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recieve
maximum
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strengths than in the sea. Domestic
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turbine
in the high land can reach 100 kilowatts of electricity
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whereas the
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in the sea
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weak
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because
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IELTS academic The diagrams represent how a wind turbine process wind energy to be electricity energy. The location of the wind turbin affect to number of electricity energy have produced.

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