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The line graph presents the amount of money earned by four cafes in New York during 12 months last year. Overall, the income of the Tea Room fell while that of the other three cafes rose by varying degrees. It is also noticeable that the income for the Tea Room was lower in the winter months than that of the other three cafes. Looking at the graph, it can be seen that the income of the Tea Room fell significantly from about $160, 000 in January to under $140, 000 in October before the figure plummeted to about $50, 000 in December. On the other hand, the income of the other three cafes rose. The income of the Internet Express dropped from about $100, 000 in January under $80, 000 in June. Then, it started to rise and hit a peak of about $138, 000 in December. During the same period, the income of Wifi Cafe nearly doubled from about $50, 000 in January to under $100, 000 in July. After that, the figure fell moderately to about $60, 000 and then there was a considerable rise to $190, 000 in December. It can be seen that the income from cafe cool rose gradually with some slight fluctuations from about $30, 000 in January to $60, 000 in November. After that, the income soared to $120, 000 in December.

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