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Data regarding imprisonment in five countries namely Great Britain

Data regarding imprisonment in five countries namely Great Britain x05Yw

Data regarding imprisonment in five countries namely Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, United States and Canada is presented for 50 years occupying the middle of 19th century as presented in the table. Figures indicate that biggest countries United States and Canada report more arrests than all other three in any time period with US recording highest of all in 1980. Great Britain mostly contained least number of cases while they were slightly increasing with respect to previous year except for 1980. New Zealand and Australia all but hovered between minimum and maximum case filings and were equal only in 1970. The difference between them was maximum only in 1980. Australia observed a plunge in the number of criminals being prisoned initially but numbers slowly rose again until final dip in 1980. Similarly, New Zealand curve took a huge dip initially but figures surged again after 1950. Table indicates that crimes do increase irrespective of size of the nation and increasing measures against them.

Data regarding imprisonment in five countries namely
 Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, United States and Canada is presented
 for 50 years occupying the middle of 19th century as presented in the table.

Figures indicate that biggest countries United States and Canada report more arrests than all other three in any time period with US recording highest of all in 1980. Great Britain mostly
 contained least number of cases while they were slightly
 increasing with respect to previous year This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
except for
 1980.

New Zealand and Australia all This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 hovered between minimum and maximum case filings and were equal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 in 1970. The difference between them was maximum This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 in 1980. Australia observed a plunge in the number of criminals being Possible spelling mistake found.prisonerpoisoned
prisoned
initially
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 numbers slowly
 rose again until final dip in 1980. Similarly
, New Zealand curve took a huge dip initially
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 figures surged again after 1950. Table indicates that crimes do increase irrespective of size of the nation and increasing measures against them. 