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The Graph illustrates the population figure for various type of turtles in india between 1980 and 2012. Overall, It is clear that the higgest populate type of turtle was olive ridley turtles in india. whereas, Leatherback turtles seen in lowest number in india. Looking into more details, Olive Ridley Turtels figure has been a dramatically increased from 100 to almost 130 between 1980 and 2012. However, Graph of all species was fulctaue throught the given period. It started at 100 and reached just below 110 at the end of period. Green Turtles and Leatherback Turtles figures declined over the period. There was a major fall in polpulation of Leatherback Turtles which become nearly half number of 1980 in 2012 account for only just above 50. Same trend appeared in Green turtles, They were reduced from 100 to nearly 90 during twelve years after slight increse in year 1999.
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higgest
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was olive
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ridley
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india
.
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whereas
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Leatherback
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figure has been a
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fulctaue
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period. It
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below 110 at the
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end
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Green
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Leatherback
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Turtles
figures declined over the period. There was a major fall in
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polpulation
of
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Leatherback
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which become
nearly
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above 50. Same trend appeared in Green
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, They were
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reduced
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90 during twelve years after slight
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increse
in year 1999.
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4 paragraphs
148 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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