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the following chart shows the sales of commercial vehicles in five regions from 1990 -1999, in 1000s

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The graph gives detail about the number of purchase vehicles between 1990 and 1999 in five difference continents: Western Europe, North America, Japan, Asia, and Eastern Europe. The figure are given in thousands. Overall, it can be seen that the trends are slight increase or decrease over the period, except North America. Looking first at the figure which increased moderately, Western Europe was the lowest. It began at about 1990 in 1990 before ending with around 2100 in the next 9 years. For Asia, there was a sharp rise in the sale of vehicles by 1000 to become 3000 in 1995. After that, It dropped slowly before rosing to the same position in 1999. Focusing on the figure that fell minimally, Eastern Europe started at around 1000 in the first years of 80s and decreased tediously by 500, half of the starting year, between 1990 to 1999. For Japan, there was a period of fluctuation in the sales of cars from 1990 to 1997. Finally, the number of car sales in Japan ended with around 1990 which was less than the beginning of 80s. Moving to the remaining figure, North America started at around 5800 in 1990, which was the highest number. Before rocketed to hit 9900 in the last year of 80s, there was a slight fall in the vehicles sale between 1990 and 1991.
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vehicles between 1990 and 1999 in five difference continents: Western Europe, North America, Japan, Asia, and Eastern Europe. The
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are
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given
in thousands.
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, it can be
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that the trends are slight increase or decrease over the period, except North America.

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which increased
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, Western Europe was the lowest. It began at about 1990 in 1990
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ending with
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2100 in the
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9 years. For Asia, there was a sharp rise in the
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sale
of vehicles by 1000 to become 3000 in 1995. After that, It dropped
slowly
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to the same position in 1999. Focusing on the
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that fell
minimally
, Eastern Europe
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started
at
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1000 in the
first
years of 80s and decreased
tediously
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. For Japan, there was a period of fluctuation in the
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of cars from 1990 to 1997.
Finally
, the number of car
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sales
in Japan ended with
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1990 which was less than the beginning of 80s.

Moving to the remaining
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, North America
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5800 in 1990, which was the highest number.
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rocketed to hit 9900 in the last
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of 80s, there was a slight fall in the
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between 1990 and 1991.
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