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The diagram below shows how avocado oil is extracted.

The diagram below shows how avocado oil is extracted. xgEjb
The diagram illustrates the process of extracting avocado oil. Overall, this process can be grouped into 3 main stages: separating avocados, delivering the byproducts of avocados, and finishing the process by separating in the centrifuge and clarifying. The first stage of the process is to collect and separate the fresh avocados, which are then washed and sent to the crusher and the rotten fruits. After being crushed to remove seeds and skins, the fresh avocados go into the blender. The byproducts of the avocados, which are rotten fruits, seeds, and skins are transported to the orchard. Blended avocados then are sent to stage 1 centrifuge, where the separation of solids and liquids occurs at the maximum temperature of 45-50. The solid waste of this stage is delivered to the orchard together with the aforementioned byproducts. The liquid in stage 1 is divided into 2 different substances - oil and waste water. Finally, oil is sent to filter and clarified before being poured into the dispenser.
The diagram illustrates the
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of extracting avocado oil.
Overall
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can
be grouped
into 3 main
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stages
: separating avocados, delivering the byproducts of avocados, and finishing the
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process
by separating in the centrifuge and clarifying.

The
first
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stage
of the
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is to collect and separate the fresh avocados, which are then washed and
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sent
to the crusher and the rotten fruits. After
being crushed
to remove seeds and skins, the fresh avocados go into the blender. The byproducts of the avocados, which are rotten fruits, seeds, and skins
are transported
to the orchard.

Blended avocados then are
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sent
to
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stage
1 centrifuge, where the separation of solids and liquids occurs at the maximum temperature of 45-50. The solid waste of this
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stage
is delivered
to the orchard together with the aforementioned byproducts. The liquid in
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1
is divided
into 2
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different
substances
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oil and waste water.
Finally
, oil is
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sent
to filter and clarified
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before
being poured
into the dispenser.
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