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The graph shows the figure for imprisonment in five diffrentcountries between 193 and 1980.

The graph shows the figure for imprisonment in five diffrentcountries between 193 and 1980. BLp8m

The presented bar graph depicts information about the number of criminals who were kept in custody in different countries from 1930 to 1980. All the data was calibrated in thousands. As an overall trend, the incarceration of Great Britain experienced an upward trend sequentially over the period from 1930 to 1980. Furthermore, with the passage of time, the USA and Canada recorded erratic changes in confinement. To begin with, between 1930 and 1940, Australia's imprisonment rate decreased. However, it increased gradually from 1940 to 1940. Unfortunately, it noticed a downward trend in 1980. With regard to New Zealand, the imprisoned criminal rate was about 100, 000 at the beginning of the year. In the year of 1940, the imprisonment rate was halved from that of 1930 as well as almost identical to 1950. In the case of the United States, the confinement rate fluctuated over the given period. Likewise, it hit its peak in the final year with 140000. Between 1930 and 1980, incarceration was recorded in Great Britain, and it gradually increased from approximately 30, 000 to about 100, 000. As noted by Canada, the number of prisoners was 120, 000. Additionally, it noted changes irregularly over the presented period, just like the USA.

The presented bar graph depicts information about the number of criminals who were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 in custody in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 countries from 1930 to 1980. All the data was calibrated
 in thousands.

As an overall
 trend, the incarceration of Great Britain experienced an upward trend sequentially
 over the period from 1930 to 1980. Furthermore
, with the passage of time, the USA and Canada recorded erratic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in confinement.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, between 1930 and 1940, Australia's imprisonment You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rate
 decreased. However
, it increased gradually
 from 1940 to 1940. Unfortunately, it noticed a downward trend in 1980. With regard to New Zealand, the imprisoned criminal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rate
 was about 100, 000 at the beginning of the year. In the year of 1940, the imprisonment You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rate
was halved
 from that of 1930 as well
 as almost identical to 1950.

In the case of the United States, the confinement You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rate
 fluctuated over the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 period. Likewise
, it hit its peak in the final year with 140000. Between 1930 and 1980, incarceration was recorded
 in Great Britain, and it gradually
 increased from approximately 30, 000 to about 100, 000. As noted by Canada, the number of prisoners was 120, 000. Additionally
, it noted This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
irregularly
 over the presented period, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 like the USA. 