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The graph shows the figure for imprisonment in five diffrentcountries between 193 and 1980.

The graph shows the figure for imprisonment in five diffrentcountries between 193 and 1980. BLp8m
The presented bar graph depicts information about the number of criminals who were kept in custody in different countries from 1930 to 1980. All the data was calibrated in thousands. As an overall trend, the incarceration of Great Britain experienced an upward trend sequentially over the period from 1930 to 1980. Furthermore, with the passage of time, the USA and Canada recorded erratic changes in confinement. To begin with, between 1930 and 1940, Australia's imprisonment rate decreased. However, it increased gradually from 1940 to 1940. Unfortunately, it noticed a downward trend in 1980. With regard to New Zealand, the imprisoned criminal rate was about 100, 000 at the beginning of the year. In the year of 1940, the imprisonment rate was halved from that of 1930 as well as almost identical to 1950. In the case of the United States, the confinement rate fluctuated over the given period. Likewise, it hit its peak in the final year with 140000. Between 1930 and 1980, incarceration was recorded in Great Britain, and it gradually increased from approximately 30, 000 to about 100, 000. As noted by Canada, the number of prisoners was 120, 000. Additionally, it noted changes irregularly over the presented period, just like the USA.
The presented bar graph depicts information about the number of criminals who were
kept
in custody in
different
countries from 1930 to 1980. All the data
was calibrated
in thousands.

As an
overall
trend, the incarceration of Great Britain experienced an upward trend
sequentially
over the period from 1930 to 1980.
Furthermore
, with the passage of time, the USA and Canada recorded erratic
changes
in confinement.

To
begin
with, between 1930 and 1940, Australia's imprisonment
rate
decreased.
However
, it increased
gradually
from 1940 to 1940. Unfortunately, it noticed a downward trend in 1980. With regard to New Zealand, the imprisoned criminal
rate
was about 100, 000 at the beginning of the year. In the year of 1940, the imprisonment
rate
was halved
from that of 1930
as well
as almost identical to 1950.

In the case of the United States, the confinement
rate
fluctuated over the
given
period.
Likewise
, it hit its peak in the final year with 140000. Between 1930 and 1980, incarceration
was recorded
in Great Britain, and it
gradually
increased from approximately 30, 000 to about 100, 000. As noted by Canada, the number of prisoners was 120, 000.
Additionally
, it noted
changes
irregularly
over the presented period,
just
like the USA.
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IELTS academic The graph shows the figure for imprisonment in five diffrentcountries between 193 and 1980.

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