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The flow chart described the process of making clothing out of recycled plastic bottles. The process had 12 steps in total. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The flow chart described the process of making clothing out of recycled plastic bottles. The process had 12 steps in total. gqoLL

The given diagram illustrates the process of making clothes by recycling plastic bottles. In total, the provided process includes 12 steps. Manufacturing period begins with collecting plastic bottles and transfering them to the factories. After that, all transported bottles are sorted and sent to cutting machine. In this machine, sorted bottles are chopped on a high-pressure force and transferred to the cleaning stage. After finishing the washing step, all of the bits are sent to the yard in order to be dried in the sun. In the following stage of the recycling process, all of the materials which are dried in the sun are sent to transformation where they are boiled and filtered. The whole boiled bits of plastic bottles are transmitted to straining phase that yarn emerges a by-product. The produced yarn is ready to be used and then weaving process begins. The woven yarn is then converted to rolls. These rolls are used to manufacture clothings.

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