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The graph shows the consumption of fastfood in uk in grams per week between 1970and 1990 . summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph shows the amount of fast food eaten between 1970 and 1990 in grams per person per week. Overall, the amount of fast food eaten more than doubled. The amount of fish and chips eaten declined slightly. In 1970, the consumption was about 300g/week. This fell to 220g/week in 1990. In contrast, sales of hamburger and pizza rocketed. In 1970, very little pizza was eaten - less than 50g/week. This rose to 280g/week by 1990. In the same period, hamburger sales shot up by more than 500%, from 100g/week in 1970 to 500 grams in 1990. In conclusion, although there was a big increase in the consumption of pizza and hamburger, sales of fish and chips decreased.
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the amount of
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between 1970 and 1990 in grams per person per week.
Overall
, the amount of
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more than doubled.

The amount of fish and chips
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declined
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. In 1970, the consumption was about
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300g/week
. This fell to
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220g/week
in 1990.

In contrast
, sales of hamburger and pizza rocketed. In 1970,
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pizza was
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less than
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50g/week
. This rose to
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280g/week
by 1990. In the same period, hamburger sales shot up by more than 500%, from
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100g/week
in 1970 to 500 grams in 1990.

In conclusion
, although there was a
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increase in the consumption of pizza and hamburger, sales of fish and chips decreased.
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IELTS academic The graph shows the consumption of fastfood in uk in grams per week between 1970and 1990.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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