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The given table compares the average distance of various means of transportation in travelling annually in a European nation in the course of 10 years commencing 1995 with projections to 2015.

The given table compares the average distance of various means of transportation in travelling annually in a European nation in the course of 10 years commencing 1995 with projections to 2015. ld51w
The given table compares the average distance of various means of transportation in travelling annually in a European nation in the course of 10 years commencing 1995 with projections to 2015. As transparent from the statistics, in this nation, people prefer travelling by bus and rail during the first 10 years. Moreover, rail is estimated to become the most popular transportation in the 2015. In 1995, 103 thousand miles was found in the total amount of miles travelled and bus registered at 56 thousand miles. This figure for rail took the second largest share, with 38 miles was recorded while the others stood at just under 5. 5 miles travelled per person. In the following 10 years, there was a significant incline in the amount of miles travelled of air and rail, with 8 thousand and 10 thousand respectively. By contrast, this figure for bicycle, motorbike and bus underwent a moderate decrease, ranging from 1 to 6 thousand miles. In 2015, rail is predicted to rise considerably and hit the peak of 60 thousand miles. Similarly, this figure for air will rocket to 20 thousand miles, with 10 times as much as the initial point. Hence, this nation is expected to see a significant growth to 138 thousand miles in the amount of miles travelled in total.
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table compares the average distance of various means of transportation in travelling
annually
in a European nation in the course of 10 years commencing 1995 with projections to 2015.

As transparent from the statistics, in this nation,
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people
prefer travelling by bus and
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rail
during the
first
10 years.
Moreover
,
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rail
is estimated
to become the most popular transportation in the 2015.

In 1995, 103 thousand miles
was found
in the total amount of miles
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travelled
and bus registered at 56 thousand miles. This figure for
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rail
took the second largest share, with
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38 miles
was recorded
while the others stood at
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under 5.
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5 miles
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travelled
per person. In the following 10 years, there was a significant incline in the amount of miles
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travelled
of air and
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rail
, with 8 thousand and 10 thousand
respectively
. By contrast, this figure for bicycle, motorbike and bus underwent a moderate decrease, ranging from 1 to 6 thousand miles.

In 2015,
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rail
is predicted
to rise
considerably
and hit the peak of 60 thousand miles.
Similarly
, this figure for air will rocket to 20 thousand miles, with 10 times as much as the initial point.
Hence
, this nation is
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expected
to
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see
a significant growth to 138 thousand miles in the amount of miles
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travelled
in total.
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IELTS academic The given table compares the average distance of various means of transportation in travelling annually in a European nation in the course of 10 years commencing 1995 with projections to 2015.

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