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Here is the statistics table shows the numbers of male and female students carrying out research on different subjects at a university in New York in 2000. Physics and astronomy are the two subjects most chosen by male students and were chosen much higher than female students. In physics is 160 boy students and in female students are 40. There is also a big difference in the choices of the two sexes in astronomy subject while there are 100 students in boys and only 40 students in girls. According to the data of the statistics table, we can see that male students love science subjects more than female students.
Here is the statistics table
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the numbers of male and
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carrying out research on
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at a university in New York in 2000.

Physics and astronomy are the two
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most chosen by male
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. In physics is 160 boy
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while there are 100
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in girls. According to the data of the statistics table, we can
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that male
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IELTS academic different subject at a university in new york

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